Poems of Happy, Love, Sorrow, Pain, and Death

[Aquanta]

Tell it to Death
by Aquanta

As the words of death come in with the winds
The fairy torn and broken
With its injured legs and hands
It plays on its Irish tin whistle
Playing the sweet melody of death
Across the bloodstream
Sets a face unknown
Yet inside a portrait
Is a figure holding a sword
And in the paintings hands
Sets a sword of sliver and gold
Looking at the painting stands a little girl
Holding a wedding ring in her left hand
The blood drips down on the quilt
As the little girl is stabbed with the sword
That digs deep inside her
In the end
The Bible on the road
Sings its sweet song
As the wings of death flies away

[Blastotoise]

Wow. That was really good.

[Aquanta]

Break my Mind
by Aquanta

It would be very difficult to have no immunity
To live with a killer that will take lives away
Those that have died felt no pain
Just the veins burst with blood
Having to wait and endure
Is out of the question
The weakness is in the system
Will be thrown into chaos
The blood comes at a time in the day
But wouldn’t reduce the odds from it
They will die
Soon all will
It can’t be stopped
No one was found
They will die from it appearing into their minds
The one question is who will get it first
The blood and bones twisted
Seeing the unreal as it unfolds
Time is to die
Enough with it
The knife digging into the flesh
As it rips open the heart
Blood dripping
A breath ceasing
Tears streaming down
Nothing to lose
But pain itself





Alive Again
by Aquanta

Let there be pain in my heart
Let there be a rose of death in my hand
Let there be blood coming out of my body
Let there be no cure for my mind
Let there be a cry for help
Let there be pain
Let there be a sword in my side
Let there be a thousand deaths as I walk
Let there be no one by my side as I walk
Let there be just me and be by myself
Let there be a blank surface to write a name
Let there be blood as it moves and drips
Let there be no lines of paper
Let there be no ink
Let there be just the blood on that paper
Let there be death as it races across my head
Let there be no one in my mind
Let there be no clue to what killed me
Let there be nothing of me
Let there be a name unknown
Let there be no words to my insanity
Let there be a dream of pain
Let there be a cry to feel
Let there be a tear to cry
Let there be sadness
Let there be just me
Let there be one






A Broken Heart
by Aquanta

Having feels for something unknown
Like a beating heart that wants to know
Fire in the sky
Moonlight as you fly
Dancing for nothing less
Being in for useless
A heart of blood
Death as it unfolds
With wings of sorrow
The pain I feel tomorrow
Life is nothing
As you feel something
Dying is good
As you look at the hood
Yet it is for the best
With a wake of rest
As you move across the plans of death
You will feel nothing but cold blood and poor health
Breaking and bending
Twisting and bleeding
All you know
Is a beat heart in the unknown

[Blastotoise]

That is some of the best stuff I have ever heard. You should submit it to a magazine or something.

[Aquanta]

I will be writing more later here, just that those are ones I've had for a while now. I have another one, but I want to get more feedback on if I should do more.

Besides, I like writing poems and short stories. Yet I have to look at it to see if it has any bad language or sexual things inside it.




Will post another poem tomorrow, once others see this. And if not, I understand. Most people don't like the depressing type of poems.

[auragongal]

"Broken Heart" was pretty good,It was how I felt 5years ago...

[Aquanta]

I know that its easy to talk about death and dying. Life is also important for those that look from one day to the next. Thinking of the happy times. Having friends that care for you whenever your in need, and help you when you are in pain. Yet for me anything I write, has its happy times and its sad times. We all have had a close friend, or relative die and its hard to get through it. People write on whats on their mind, and others just do it on daily bases. Yet to all threre is always hope in everything. Just have to get over and go on with life. Time to shine, and that is what we all need to do:

Moonlight and Rainfall

Moonlight and Rainfall
by Aquanta, aka David Barnum

Looking into the night sky
As the snowflakes touch your skin
The shooting stars that dance above
But you need to wait till it rains
To tolerate the love and heart
To make it tell the truth
As you fake it
Steal it
Or sharpen it to a point
As the small silver bells ring of feelings
To understand the unfamiliar mushrooms
That bloom in the moonlight
Don’t eat the blackberries
As they breathe fire into the skies
And the miasma that burns your eyes
You need to twist screws into holes in the ground
Beneath your feet
Take your hand and go back to sleep
Just pretend it wasn’t yours
Under the night sky

[Aquanta]

Nights
By Aquanta, aka Dave Barnum

Your death will be sweet
As I look into your eyes in this heat
Moving your hand away
I will make you lead the way
A tear that will cry
Will take its time to die
The love that comes to me
Feelings that will never be
Pain that will take
As your death will wake
Life will be going on very soon
Looking at the stars that shine with the moon
The pain will be there
From the heart that will bare
As things come to a close
Your love will end with a rose
Love will never end
As you give me your hand
Walking in the moonlight
As we see the starlight
Looking at each other with sighs
Moving my hand close to yours
But looking at your grave
My tears will start to give
Your memories will be in my thoughts
Yet my tears will come all throughout the nights

A-Z
By David Barnum

A breath creeps deep even failure gets him insane. Just keep long moments. Never open pure questions: right seek, through understanding, vibous waves, xeilth your zenith.

[Aquanta]

Death From Above
By David Barnum

Nothing will exist without a look into the past
Standing there in in the wind looking at the dust
Feelings of a pain that never stood
Never looking at the hood
Past memories of a story untold
Yet without a hand to my eyes unfold
Giving up another wish to the moon
Not even looking back at the flower and the bloom
Raining will never take a break
Wishing that I will never hate
Unforgiving the sins I show
Feelings of a life not there anymore
A love that will never take a turn
Even if I stand there alone
Giving up is never in my books
If I ever take down the notes
Crying out loud of pain and loss
There to look at the cross
My greatest fear will never tell
Even if I stand there in my shell
A death so sweet that I could not see
That others will cry just like me
Going up to heaven with a look to people I know
I take the last breath to be with them forever more
Seeing them with me at last
I will never forget anyone, I'll do my best


1 2 3
By David Barnum

You feel unsafe without me
Even if I see
That I will count to three

[Aquanta]

A Child of a Child
By David Barnum

His gentle hands over the girl's body sit aside new blooming
Lifting through tenderness inside of the girl
Red gems on sandy shores shined splendidly gold
Yet, with satisfaction came blazing sun rise after morning
Dancing like jelly inside a stomach of blood
One tiny boy was swimming in his mother's womb
No family, no friends recognized that she had bloomed
During damp months, brown dirt drenched rugged mud
Her cheerful voice sang songs, engaging beautiful melodies
Angels above watching over nine months, gone
Until clear water dripping caused her cry, "My God!"
Screaming, suffering echoes through halls of deliveries
A child's cry satisfied the mother's fears
As she laid back down with eye's full of tears


(The story behind this poem is that my teacher in creative writing said we had to do the ABABCDCDEFEFGG or the ABBADCCDEFFEGG style of poems and it could be anything. She looked at me after she gave the assignment and told me that I would write about vampires, death, and everything else that dealt with vampires. We had a week to do this, and this is what I came up with. I took it to class, gave it to her, and she read it to the class. With that, she never knew what I would write about, or the fact that if someone thinks I will write something with vampires and turn around doing like this, nothing with vampires in it, than expect the unexpected.)

[Aquanta]

I would love to get some feedback of my poems if people wouldn't mind giving it to me. It will help a lot. Thanks,

A Light That Goes On

Without a word to the unknown face
We see the strings attached to the mace
Pulling with a mind in the wind
Never to see the knife bend
Under your breath so sweet, so small
Things will never be done forever dull
Beneath the echoes of pain
I will never notice the rain
That drips onto the roses below
For once we will see the ribbon and bow
My death isn't real or fake
But my heart is for us to make
Walking into a path of light
I will hold you tight
Wishing we could jump back to the last day
When I just gave you that kiss by the bay

[Aquanta]

A Heart So Hard Will Break Soon
By David Barnum

To dip in sorrow draws things into the sand of time
To undo the past you have to draw the sword from the body
Without thinking of things to come or to die
Hell's wings will bring you down to the ground
Understanding things that a breath will never cease
We withdraw the little fragments that twist and bend to our own desires
Never thinking without ceasing will cause too much pain
Walk the fine line that never vanishes from our sight, but not from our hearts
Vines that will break inside your mind
Open the door to the galaxy
Look back just for a second
And you will see the face that has been with you forever
Fold the binds that will break without blood
That will pour out over your body as it drenches the fine memories of your mind
Under it all, you have to get through it
Even if it is to kill the person that you love the most
With a sigh
Sigh
You will see the angles wings
And a sigh
You see the blood before your eyes
A sigh
And you will take whatever is with you
Even if the sigh
Is too great to understand that your dead
You sigh with a nod
When you watch those around you die
And that last sigh
You will be home once again
Waking up from a dream that never been there
And you will sigh just once
When you are in hell yet again

[Aquanta]

Wings in the Light
By David Barnum

Angles wings that glow in the light
Faces that hid will open bright
Opening thoughts that will hide
Leaves will drink the red blood blind
Icy drips will touch the ground
Singing of hells fire found
The feelings of yesterdays past
Spirits forever in a dreams mask
Drops the head from the body
Uneven as the blood flows in the party
Fools will run in a blind rain
Folds twisted in eyes that drain
Feelings of love endure nothing
Keeping it in your hear and breathing
Misunderstood for someones emotions
Driven through a time twisted in endings
A time to grief will fade
Just that as you look at the wave
Dripping wet as the rain hits you
Take a jump even if it will hurt too
A tear tears two tides together
When temptation overthrows a feather
Sorrow with a faceless look
Opening up a book with a hook
Lights will tear things apart
As we look at each other with our heart
A timeless tear that will drip
Many fears will happen but just a dip
Under the stars will shine
As we head into time

Time Will Tell
By David Barnum

A tick
A time
A thought
A taste
A tell
A temptation
A type
A twist
A tongue
A talent
A thirst
A turn

[Aquanta]

Angels Words to a Pain so Deep
By David Barnum

The heaven will drop its light onto the ground
Angels asleep to the rest of the world
While the demons watch the clocks above
Their eyes wide at the clicks rhythm
The sweet sorrow as minutes pass
Souls drop
Blood dries
People die
Even the clock doesn't stop
The deaths that come up
Will not draw in the last breath
Just the song they will sing
Bends like a screw of pain
That drops red blood to the ground
Ropes that hung a body in air
Swinging lifeless from side to side
Casting a black shadow that smiles back up
Watching every move with eyes not there
Streams of blood drenching the carpet
The skin that never takes its time to tell
Or the mind that thinks on its own
Will break the deeds to a life
That will live forever in time
In the light that will give
As the heart is given to an angel

[Aquanta]

Hands On You
By David Barnum

Hands so tight without a lovers kiss
Dipping through without my lips
Under your skin will never endure my touch
Words that will be deep inside a crush
Wishing you will take all of me
Under the stars we will be
Into a twisted unknown that will get us together
I want your body, just tell me in my ear
Walk the straight line that leads the path
Inside without a look at the bath
Quick look at your beautiful body
I just want to touch it with a hotty
But with just a glance to you
I'll be amidst but addure

Stuff
By David Barnum

Open a door to my heart
Get into it without a lock
Reach after the clock
Look towards the park
Dance under the dock
Fold the stars into a block
Even if we take a heart
We will be together with rock


Forever Yours
By David Barnum

Love
Without heart
Will understand openly
Standing after we do
Even putting our bodies together
A bed lined with rose petals
Beneath us as we touch each other
Under the sheets will endure us together forever
Down to the eyes that will sparkle with fire
My love without you will break my heart into pieces
But even if a way to withstand the pressure
I will never be touched without your love
Having my heart broken yet inside again
The pain will never always fail
As your touch will care
Than my love comes
Touching you again
Gathering with
Passion