Call of Origin: Elemental Spirit Discussion Thread
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Sorry Simeon -_-
Silver hasn't taught me about slang
*grabs gun and points it to head*
So MK, MindReading is a power of great destruction ay *Bursts into laughter* It said in the bio that Trik had a 'power of great destruction' and it got replaced with MindReader when Ragnarok separated from him.
Silver and BM don't need to submit their NineTech's cause you already did.
Now to wait for MK.
Silver hasn't taught me about slang
*grabs gun and points it to head*
So MK, MindReading is a power of great destruction ay *Bursts into laughter* It said in the bio that Trik had a 'power of great destruction' and it got replaced with MindReader when Ragnarok separated from him.
Silver and BM don't need to submit their NineTech's cause you already did.
Now to wait for MK.
I still say no but I'll wait for the others to post their thoughts
To the CoO cast: I'm finished with my exams so my characters please *holds out hand*
Thank's
<span style='color:orange'>I'm in the cast now.</span>
<span style='color:orange'><"Who are you?"></span>
<span style='color:orange'>we arn't far enough in the plot for you to know.</span>
<span style='color:deeppink'>so when will we know?</span>
when Simeon gets the quest up.
<span style='color:orange'>Simeon the character or Simeon the player?</span>
player.
<span style='color:darkred'>oh, OK.</span>
<span style='font-size:8pt;line-height:100%'>This fine print is to state that ???dude's answer is right. I don't want to let him in since he just joined</span>
To the CoO cast: I'm finished with my exams so my characters please *holds out hand*
Thank's
<span style='color:orange'>I'm in the cast now.</span>
<span style='color:orange'><"Who are you?"></span>
<span style='color:orange'>we arn't far enough in the plot for you to know.</span>
<span style='color:deeppink'>so when will we know?</span>
when Simeon gets the quest up.
<span style='color:orange'>Simeon the character or Simeon the player?</span>
player.
<span style='color:darkred'>oh, OK.</span>
<span style='font-size:8pt;line-height:100%'>This fine print is to state that ???dude's answer is right. I don't want to let him in since he just joined</span>
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*folds arms and sighs*
I would say "no" due to the already confusing number of characters and cast members... but this is part of the test: I want to see you write. No...not just a few sentences... I mean WRITE.
Write an essay about yourself and your character and what you and said character will contribute to this already big storyline...
IF you are any good as an imaginative writer AND can keep the continuity.. I MIGHT let you in and play.
I would say "no" due to the already confusing number of characters and cast members... but this is part of the test: I want to see you write. No...not just a few sentences... I mean WRITE.
Write an essay about yourself and your character and what you and said character will contribute to this already big storyline...
IF you are any good as an imaginative writer AND can keep the continuity.. I MIGHT let you in and play.
*waves hand in a jedi-like manner* Move along. Nothing to see here...
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???Dude, I hate to say this but probably not. Now for the Explanation. From what I see (Which isn't the best), your Grammar is fine (Silver on the other hand, might find a few mistakes...). But like in ROM, They require you to read all of the RP so far (Which you said you have), and be an active poster in the forums. So, become somewhat of an Active Poster, so we'll know you won't be ditching us, and we might consider it. You wouldn't be the first person to join PV, only do like 2 or 3 posts, and says "lolz cn i jion" (<--- Sentence was like that on purpose). It's also like Simeon said, we need to see a sample of your work as well.
Hey Shansaroonie, MindReading wasn't the power of "Great Destruction". When Ragnarok left Trik's body, He took that power with him. Trik just needed a replacement 3rd power, so I gave him that instead. Even though, well, Trik doesn't have MindReading anymore. He does have SpiritSense now, so uh... Look! Giant Chicken! *Points and runs*
Later Edit: Anyone mind if Trik fights the last Minion?
Hey Shansaroonie, MindReading wasn't the power of "Great Destruction". When Ragnarok left Trik's body, He took that power with him. Trik just needed a replacement 3rd power, so I gave him that instead. Even though, well, Trik doesn't have MindReading anymore. He does have SpiritSense now, so uh... Look! Giant Chicken! *Points and runs*
Later Edit: Anyone mind if Trik fights the last Minion?
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His grammar seems all right... much better than others that have asked to join. But, my answer is still no... for now. We have no idea how good you really are at roleplaying. I mean, I don't think Immortal Servant should even be in it. We let him join but he's extremely inactive, and though it isn't his fault, it would have been nicer if he warned us before hand. That's not the only reason, though... he says, "You guys need to do something so I can post!" But that shouldn't be the case. HE should be the one interacting, not witing for us to interact with him. Plus, most of his posts are like, one liners. Id there's one thing that ticks me off, it's one liners. We need to be sure you won't do that to us. You don't seem too bad, though. I can't flat out reject you, because I can't find big enough faults in your posts...
Just minor stuff. Like, you didn't capitalize the s in so when it was the beginning of the sentance, but it could have just been a typo. That happens to me a lot, so I can't say anything. I also find it annoying when people use multiple exclamation points when not indicating extreme feeling. n00bs do that a lot. It would make it easier to read if you used *'s rather than ^'s to indicate action and such, but everyone has their own style...
So... final answer for your joinage: Not yet. Wait until we know what you're capable of.
Oh, and I saw we need a few more trivia questions to prove that you've read the whole thing. Here's one- What was Kayla's original name and font color?
Just minor stuff. Like, you didn't capitalize the s in so when it was the beginning of the sentance, but it could have just been a typo. That happens to me a lot, so I can't say anything. I also find it annoying when people use multiple exclamation points when not indicating extreme feeling. n00bs do that a lot. It would make it easier to read if you used *'s rather than ^'s to indicate action and such, but everyone has their own style...
So... final answer for your joinage: Not yet. Wait until we know what you're capable of.
Oh, and I saw we need a few more trivia questions to prove that you've read the whole thing. Here's one- What was Kayla's original name and font color?
"Irregardless" and "Over exaggerated" are NEVER CORRECT EVER because they are redundant
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.

Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.

To ???dude: Sorry, it looks like a no.
To MK: Oh... OK. So will Trik get MindControled?
To Simeon: So, we wait?
To Silvvy:
To Imortal Servant: How long do you think you will be out of commision?(sp?)
I used ?'s... for once!!!
To MK: Oh... OK. So will Trik get MindControled?
To Simeon: So, we wait?
To Silvvy:
Huh?HE should be the one interacting, not writing for us to interact with him.
To Imortal Servant: How long do you think you will be out of commision?(sp?)
I used ?'s... for once!!!
