Drawing that need critique...
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Drawing that need critique...
Ooh kaay so I'm an artist (or so I like to think) and I wanted some feedback on what my drawings needed. So, if any of you could just...tell me what I need to do. That would be TERRIFIC!!!
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Re: Drawing that need critique...
ok sorry i forgot to add the drawing.... 
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Re: Drawing that need critique...
I've already seen this drawing before, and it's still awesome as always. 
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Re: Drawing that need critique...
The girl doesn't really have an elbow, and her skin could probably use a bit more shading, but very good overall.
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Re: Drawing that need critique...
Wow. oO
That looks quite nice. I like how much detail you've put into the folds in her dress. :3
But yeah, as Josiah said, her right arm doesn't have much elbow. Also, the palm is rather too short; the average hand has approximately half its length from wrist to middle knuckle, and the remaining half from that knuckle to the tip of the middle finger. Additionally, because the palm isn't long enough, the thumb also looks stunted. It should extend to almost halfway up the first section of the pointer finger. There are variations on hand proportions, but there usually isn't much difference between palm and (middle) finger length.
I assume that her left leg is behind the right and her left foot curls around to be in front of the right ankle. It looks okay, but the foot looks like it sorta comes out of nowhere. The angle of the heel is also somewhat off. I don't have a visual handy, though, so I can't really suggest how you could fix it...
Finally, hair doesn't end to clump in that way, but it is quite hard to draw long hair in motion, and it looks good as it is.
Great job with it overall, though. :3
That looks quite nice. I like how much detail you've put into the folds in her dress. :3
But yeah, as Josiah said, her right arm doesn't have much elbow. Also, the palm is rather too short; the average hand has approximately half its length from wrist to middle knuckle, and the remaining half from that knuckle to the tip of the middle finger. Additionally, because the palm isn't long enough, the thumb also looks stunted. It should extend to almost halfway up the first section of the pointer finger. There are variations on hand proportions, but there usually isn't much difference between palm and (middle) finger length.
I assume that her left leg is behind the right and her left foot curls around to be in front of the right ankle. It looks okay, but the foot looks like it sorta comes out of nowhere. The angle of the heel is also somewhat off. I don't have a visual handy, though, so I can't really suggest how you could fix it...
Finally, hair doesn't end to clump in that way, but it is quite hard to draw long hair in motion, and it looks good as it is.
Great job with it overall, though. :3
Should I...oh whatever. /o/
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Re: Drawing that need critique...
Thank you! 
I realize that the arm is a tiny bit to...rubbery, I guess is a good word for it? And the hands always give me trouble, but thank you sooo much for all the tips on how to draw them! I didnt really know what to do with the hair, because I was much to lazy to actually draw each individual strand in motion like that, so I just kind of...ended it...
Thanks for all of the feedback! I really appricate it!
I realize that the arm is a tiny bit to...rubbery, I guess is a good word for it? And the hands always give me trouble, but thank you sooo much for all the tips on how to draw them! I didnt really know what to do with the hair, because I was much to lazy to actually draw each individual strand in motion like that, so I just kind of...ended it...
Thanks for all of the feedback! I really appricate it!