I wrote a new song

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pokchu
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Okay, I wrote this in class, and It's based on a real-life experience. Enjoy.

Verse 1
I remember the day I said,
"We can't see each other anymore"
You got so f***ing pissed.

It was because you and your friends,
wouldn't stop treating me,
like a piece of s***!

And even though, I hated you
I despise,
But I love,
And I miss you, baby.

Chorus
This is, the way it is,
I always saw you, as more than just a friend,
And even though you treated me like a piece, of, s***,
I still miss you...I still miss you, baby.

Verse 2
The day I met you,
I thought to my-self,
"Man she's f***ing hot"!
But when I approached you everyday,
You thought of me as just a friend.

And when you accused me,
Of having feelings for you,
I said no,
Cause I feared losing you.
Forever.

And even though,
I loved you,
I would never
ever get
to have you, baby.

Chorus

Verse 3
Every day, I thought it would always,
be the same, Oooh yeah, I was being retarded.
And when your closest friend moved away,
I thought I could make my move,
I never got a chance.

Cause I was too loyal to my girlfriend,
I never see her, and yet she mot-i-vated me,
for us to just be friends,
I would never have you
ever again.

Now I realize, I love you,
But now it's
Too late
I can't now,
I miss you.

Chorus x2

Verse 4
I hope to see you again,
And maybe in the end,
we can become,
more than,
just friends.

That year of chances has blown away,
One day will be the day,
Then I will make up my mind,
On who'll I'll side with,
forever...

I've always loved you,
I always will,
I want,
I need,
I love you, baby.

Chorus x2

I love you...baby...

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Post by Teruko-Sama »

Wowz. Quite sad, Pokky. :<
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Post by shauni »

Its good ^_^
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Post by pokchu »

Well. I guess that's good to hear. Any other comments?
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Post by Neo Zanther »

Well you have potential for sure. It was good. Abit sad but as you said, it's from real-life and that can be sad at times. Very nice job on it and good luck :)
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Post by pokchu »

Neo Zanther wrote: Well you have potential for sure. It was good. Abit sad but as you said, it's from real-life and that can be sad at times. Very nice job on it and good luck :)
Thanks. Maybe Jeff can explain once I finsih telling him. We are in the chatroom. :D #Pebbleversion
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