My Poems

Here's where you can put your non-fanfic stories, poems, and the like.

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shauni
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Post by shauni »

wow!

Your getting alot better at these! That was great!
"BOW BEFORE THE SHAUNINESS THAT IS SHAUNI! "--Shadowman

"Shauni fell down a drainage ditch and died. That was the end of her pokemon journey. "--Shauni


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Ty. It's always nice to hear that I'm getting better. Now if I could just get the final poem that's floating around to fully develope :)
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All I have to say is keep it up. You're doing good and practice makes purfect :)
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I like this, keep (it) up! 0:-)
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Post by Neo Zanther »

The Flower


The flower stats off as such a tiny seed
almost seems insanifagent in the sceem of the world.
But give it water and nutrents, it sprouts and begins to grow.

After time green peaks above the ground, the start of life is now on.
It gets it's first peak of sunlight, the most important thing for it.
For if it doesn't get it, it could die.

The sprout grows and grows and soon flowers begin to develope.
These flowers will bloom someday, the plant will be the best it can.
For when the flowers bloom, the plant will be very important.

Soon the flower is pollinated and the begining of a new life have begun.
Even though the flower may wither and soon die, the seeds keep on growing.

The flower is dead and the plant is dying but life will keep on trying
as the seeds fall the ground and it starts again.

People are like flowers.
We start off life as a small seed and we sprout and grow.
Soon we see the light as we too enter the world.

We grow and develope and soon our flowers are ready to bloom.
We find someone dear to us and soon our seeds will grow.

We grow old and we may wither but our seeds have devloped and will start life again.
And we will die, just like the flower but just like it, we have kept life going.

((Sorry for all the spellling errors. I'll fix them later. Hum, may have to improve on the poem abit too :) ))
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Post by Neo Zanther »

Just posting to say that I'm still doing this thread. I have 1 or 2 more poems comming soon :)
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