IPA Apprentice: Team Impossible Cash

Post by **Cheezdude** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:40 am

Darn, that was bad luck. If i can't get more grammatical errors than Josiah, I lose!
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Some may see Silver as a macaber megalomaniac, but this is not unfounded.

'but' should be added.

Post by **Giga-Gar** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:44 am

Uh, Josiah, that was already corrected.

Post by **Cheezdude** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:57 am

"... if Josiah gets the poisition"

Should the I be capitalized after the three dots?

Post by **Giga-Gar** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:26 pm

Silver wrote:Then again in the resent D. Gray Man chapter, Cross was... or at least he certainly look... well, dead.

Then again in the resent D. Gray Man chapter, Cross was... or at least he certainly looked... well, dead.

Post by **Josiah** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 2:16 pm

((You sure my name was already capitalized? Cause I did go through all the old posts to check...))

((Whether or not you capitalize after an ellipse depends on the context. Sometimes they need spaces too.))

Then again in the recent D. Gray Man chapter

Then again, in the recent D. Gray Man chapter (comma added)

Post by **Saber Knight** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 4:12 pm

Yeah, I already capitalized the J.

Post by **Giga-Gar** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 5:41 pm

Silver wrote:I'm finally have way to having my very own mined slave!

I'm finally half way to having my very own mined slave!

Post by **Cheezdude** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:06 pm

Silver wrote:I'm finally have way to having my very own mined slave!

Mined should be mind.

Post by **Giga-Gar** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:10 pm

((Already corrected))

Post by **Cheezdude** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:35 pm

Darn. Control F, how have you failed me?

Me and Josiah are tied. *gulp*

Post by **Josiah** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:52 pm

Watch you guys suffer is what I live 4

Watching you guys suffer is what I live 4

Post by **Giga-Gar** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:57 pm

((that was already corrected as well. Would anyone mind if I post the paragraph with everyone's corrections in it?))

Silver wrote:Maybe Ill make the next challenge Stand Up Comedy accept that this is the Internet so I'd have no idia if you actually stood up or not.

Maybe Ill make the next challenge stand Up Comedy accept that this is the Internet so I'd have no idia if you actually stood up or not.
(I'm pretty sure that those three words arn't proper nouns)

Post by **Cheezdude** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 7:44 pm

If that's right I'll go ahead and de-capitalize the U.

Post by **Josiah** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 7:46 pm

((I have a similiar paragraph but if yours is right I seem to have missed a bit...))

Going off what they said:

comedy

Post by **Saber Knight** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 7:53 pm

I was going to de-cap that, but I wasn't sure if it was necessary.

I also have 3 versions of the original paragraph: A copy of the original, a version with all mistakes bolded and the corrections in parenthesis (with the mistakes I corrected in green) and a version with all mistakes just corrected. The 2nd version used to have mistakes to be corrected in blue.