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Josiah
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Grammar? Who needs grammar?

Post by Josiah »

Not to make fun of anyone... Ok maybe a little... I just got a submission for my guest comic contest (which you guys should all enter as well) and kinda had to share this with someone and, since putting it on the main website would be a bit too mean, I'm putting it here instead.

So, here's the e-mail.
i fingered id submit sumthin to ur gest wek cause ur comix is kool 'v always
luved ur comix i'm 10 yrs old & want 2 maek comix like u do i hope u liek my
guest comix i hope wally dusnt leave 4 gud i rly hope wally shows up agi

ps: cn u plz tll me were u get ur spirits ad wat sftwaer do u use to maek ur
comix thx
And here's the comic.
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I know the kid is only 10 but when I was 10 I knew proper English...
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Post by Blastotoise »

i wasnt even that bad when i first joined.......
Weepitang - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Steel; Abilities: Clear Body, Chlorophyll; Attacks: Take Down, Vine Whip, Psychic, Wrap. Level 17

............ - Gender: Male; Type: Fighting, Flying; Abilities: Guts, Inner Focus; Attacks: Leech Life, Leer, Low Kick, Revenge. Level 15

Sudonette - Gender: Male; Type: Rock, Ghost; Abilities: Insomnia, Rock Head; Attacks: Knock Off, Copycat,Rock throw, Curse. level 5

Metarion(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Metal; Abilities: Shield Dust, Sturdy; Attacks: Metal Claw, Tackle, Mud-Slap, Headbutt. Level 8

Shieldyu(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Water, Ground; Abilities: Sturdy, Natural Cure; Attacks: Tackle, Protect, Rapid Spin, take down. Level 5

Lola - Gender: Female; Type: Psychic, Flying; Abilities: Inner Focus, Synchronize; Attacks: Teleport, Leech Life, Leer


Silver wrote:I love you The n00b. You don't have to be jealous of actual n00bs. There's only room in my heart for you. I'm just... disappointed that you left me for so long. It was lonely... you promised you'd write to me, but you never did... the months passed by, and I still thought of you every day, but you never called. I never got any letters from you.

So eventually, I started to lose faith... I thought you had been killed in that terrible, terrible war. Or maybe that you had forgotten about me. It's been so long, you probably found another girl over there... I never stopped loving you, but I didn't think you cared about me anymore, so welcoming you back just would have been too painful for me... I'm sorry. I'm glad you've come back home *sniff*
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Post by Simsmagic »

Wow... Silver would hate that kid...

Speaking of which, I'm thinking of entering a comic myself. Starring me, announcing my takeover over the universe using my lazer.
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Post by PoikSpirit »

Reminds me of writing I found that I wrote when I was five. Oh wait, I knew how to spell "like" back then.

Looks like a bad combination between Hooked on Phonics and chatspeak.

Just hope that he doesn't find the forums...
Hmm... This signature just got really short...
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Sandiyama♂ (Ground, Fighting) Tackle, Vital Throw, Swift, Arm Thrust (Wins 8, Losses 0) Guts&Sand Veil
Swalectrode (Electric, Poison) Attacks: Yawn, Tackle, Sludge, Screech (Wins 5, Losses 0) Exp:30 Static&Liquid Ooze Status: Lost T.T
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Post by Cheezdude »

Hehe.

That's funny.
Even Marley was better than that! :-P
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Post by DarkQuest »

wow it's really hard to right like that again, i just tried to make a sentence like that but it's too hard...
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